I am a Year 6 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Learning Space 1 and my teachers are Mr Wong and Mr Ogilive.
Friday, 22 December 2017
Bonus Activity: In Flanders Fields -Week 2
Today for my summer learning journey blogging was about In Flanders Fields this Activity had a little poem we had to read the poem and try and think if the poem was good or not. But Thought the poem was actually 100% good because it some rhyming words in it and some good words like fly die,Those were the kind of words we had in the poem.
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Hi Kaitlyn,
ReplyDeleteRuby here from the Summer Learning Journey team! It's great to see that you've been working on these activities. Keep up the good work!
I thought the poem was good too! It made me feel very sad, but the writing was beautiful and the message is important. What message do you think this poem is telling us?
There were many people who lost family and friends during the war. How do you think they feel when they read this poem? I think they would have felt proud but also very very sad.
I look forward to reading more of your blog over the summer.
Cheers,
Ruby.
Kia Ora Kaitlyn,
ReplyDeleteCadence here from the Summer Learning Journey (SLJ) team!
Thanks for posting a great slideshow. You put a lot of time and effort into this so well done. You deserve full points for this post. This is a beautiful poem, very important message just like Ruby said.
I love that you have included the poem in your post too! Makes it easy for your readers to follow and understand.
Keep up the great work, I’m looking forward to seeing more of your posts.
Cadence 😊