Messed and fixed recount | Writing | Sentence structure

Good Recount:
We wasted to much time. Dom and I were not fit witch made us wasted even more time. We had to stop occasionally to catched out breath, breath some oxygen from a can, or just stretch. Watched the sunrise from the steep unprotected side of the mountain. The tiny red speck into a great glowed globe in the dark sky.

Bad recount:

We will waste to much time. Dom and I were not fit witch made us waste even more time. We have to stop occasionally to catched out breathe, breathe sum oxygen from a can, or just stretch. Watched the sunrise from the steep unprotected side of the mountain. The tiny red speck into a great glowed globe in the dark sky.

 LI: to correct certain structure and language features in a recount, and to evaluate writing samples using the PBS writing rubric, and to correct certain structure and language features in a recount.
This week for writing , for my writing groups we learned about Sentence structer. The sentence structer that involes in a recount is TEE. T - Stands for Topic sentence , E - stands for Explanation and the other E stands for ending sentence. Stephan kings , Read one bit of paragrah and fixed the sentence and words that didn't make sense. We had to see what kinds of sentence had to fit and relate to each other that it will make the sentence even better.