Writing / Story Organizer

LI:To brainstorm. LI:To write a 18 sentence Narrative.
Today During our normal writing lesson we had to finish our Story organizer writing about Tom the dog that was lost. We had to right a 3 sentence problem in the problem secction. Then we had to go show Mr wong , Mr wong gave us feedback on our learning and told us instead of using that word we can use other words that includes in a narrative. My title was : Will Tom make it home? The title is talking about if Tom will Find a way home or not. We had write the Problem , Events,Solution. AudioRecorder