One day there was a Haunted house across from Emma's house Emma was dying to see the the haunted house but she wasn't allowed to she was scared to go she might be haunted to but All of a sudden Emma said i don't care know one can stop me from going to that haunted house. The next day she dreaming about the haunted house she walked slowly into the house there was a grandma and grandpa there Emma said to don't touch her the grandma said we won't touch we are nice well welcome do you want something to eat my dear said grandma Emma said no thank you i would like to go eat at my own house but thank you for the offer grandma said you are not leaving this house until you eat Emma said i don't want to eat i love cookies better i don't want to eat some kind of disgusting stuff at a haunted house. The grandma said how dare you say that to us we have been grateful and leted you in our house now eat. Emma said no i will not eat this Until you get me fresh cookies now hurry.
One day Emma woke up with a bad dream. Emma woke up got out of bed and she felt scared cause she had that bad dream Emma screamed out loud Then Emma said come out whoever you are if you one of the one of those people who live in that haunted house please go i am scared Emma One of those people who was living in that haunted house they all said no no we are not leaving if you come with us we will cook lovely food like cookies and cake we will also buy you ice cream Emma said yay let's go but remember don't touch me okay. Emma and the haunted people were walking suddenly their heard a strange noise Emma said what was that tell me al i go back.
When Emma arrived at the haunted house she said i might just walk back thank you but it's really chilly in here i like it when the heater is on The people said we have a heater here come check it out Emma was halfway there to her house Emma said no i do not like it here i am going back when Emma was on here way someone grabbed her on the the arm Emma said let me go i wasn't liking it at the haunted house now would you let me go now the man said okay but be careful.
When she got to her house the door was locked Emma said oh no let me check the windows Emma walked around checking if there was window open she said those people must wanted me to come and get me get locked out Emma said that is the last time i am going to that haunted house Emma was just sleeping on the ground Emma said that haunted house is tricky.
LI we had to describe a photo and right what we can see in the photo we had to write in paragraphs and we had to think of a title my title was the haunted house. and i wrote a orientation and a Events. we had to write heaps of paragraphs like we were told me and my friend charlize was working together as a partner we both done different titles and different orientation.
One next morning Emma found when the sun was slowly going down she saw a shadow coming out Emma said come look guys i see a shadow The haunted people said that is tony our old coach for last year Emma said oh okay that's fine that i know who tony is better be tony if he is a bad person stuff poor and haunted people you can go back to your house now thank you bye haunted people by the way the door is locked and the widows to.
Greetings Kaitlyn
ReplyDeleteI think you should write a blurb so people can know what you did and how you did it.What did you learn and how did you learn it?l really like the way you wrote your story.
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